Sunday 21 April 2019

My haiku published today at haiku universe



he takes a long pull

on a cigarette

beside the church door



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I think the haiku which follows it by R Soos is better.



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6 comments:

  1. Magyar24 April 2019 at 07:19

    Ummmm... .
    __ Sorry to disagree Gwilym, yours taunts more imagination from each reader's mind. _m

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    1. Gwil W25 April 2019 at 01:04

      Many thanks Magyar. All the best to you.

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  2. Sackerson26 April 2019 at 12:21

    On the way in... On the way out... Very thought-provoking.

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    1. Gwil W27 April 2019 at 22:27

      Where we know. Who, what, when and why are the unknowns.

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    2. Gwil W27 April 2019 at 22:29

      Your Warriors strong and well crafted. I like it.

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    3. Sackerson29 April 2019 at 14:58

      Thank you!

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